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Good news, day 1

Iver N.
Чслапд чушвпчке оржыпршщо.
One week ago Ajerieru tagged me in a Positive News flashmob. Yep, it's about writing five good or happy daily facts in next seven days.
Few days ago my friend texted me: I believe I still need alternative keyboards not to seem so "look at me I'm fucking English-speaking". I was moaning a little about my low grammar skills and short lack of practice in English (as usual). But after some time afterwards I deciced to use the flashmob to study. Simple and fun (hope so)!

1) In the morning I visited a dentist. And arranged an appointment for next wednesday.
2) At work I finished sewing a dress in beautiful dusty rose color. It takes a two and half days two days and half because of a complicated arm-hole.
3) I finished composing texts for the next Aivere's poetry book.
4) My bonnie made delicious dinner.
5) I've got a new idea about a painting.

I'll tag somebody tomorrow, hurry to bed now.
Hey, my English-speaking friends! If you've got any correction — feel free to feedback)

Upd: check some misprints and mistakes, thanks to FanOldie-kun.

@темы: Внешности, Разговорность

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2017-06-02 в 06:48 

FanOldie-kun
Древний магистр Оймама Джумбабах делает гимнастику старцев с горы Ху Линам.
I've been reading you for not that long and can't be called a friend yet but I still want to help. Hope this is OK.

2017-06-02 в 10:54 

Iver N.
Чслапд чушвпчке оржыпршщо.
FanOldie-kun, wow, thanks! I'm very glad for any help)
The basic problem I see is ill use of articles. — yep, you're right. And if you have time for indicate them please do it.
I still try to construct phrases like in Russian and haven't clear understanding about grammar rules. Maybe reading in English more be helpful?

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2017-06-02 в 11:21 

FanOldie-kun
Древний магистр Оймама Джумбабах делает гимнастику старцев с горы Ху Линам.
Iver N., yes, reading can help, especially if it is good modern literature. Word use can be time-specific, some ways of phrasing get outdated, so classical literature is not always a good choice. As for articles, I need to get to PC, as my mobile device is not convenient for quoting. Later, perhaps?

2017-06-02 в 15:23 

Iver N.
Чслапд чушвпчке оржыпршщо.
FanOldie-kun, Later, perhaps? — no problem.
good modern literature— can you advice me some titles? I've tried "Dandelion Wine" by Bradbury and think start something by Neil Gaiman.

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2017-06-02 в 17:02 

FanOldie-kun
Древний магистр Оймама Джумбабах делает гимнастику старцев с горы Ху Линам.
Iver N., I'm not the best adviser, but I saw good reviews on Terry Pratchett's books. Gaiman, too. I'd better ask a friend who reads way more than me.

2017-06-02 в 22:18 

FanOldie-kun
Древний магистр Оймама Джумбабах делает гимнастику старцев с горы Ху Линам.
I'm finally home and so can continue checking. On second tought I decided to mark places where articles are missing with _. There are also some extra words that should have been deleted during the editing but still remained. Or maybe it's just that html tags got lost in the quote. Those are lined through.
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I still have not asked about the books. Personally I remember only some good textbooks. If there is any need, I'll name them.

2017-06-04 в 09:52 

FanOldie-kun
Древний магистр Оймама Джумбабах делает гимнастику старцев с горы Ху Линам.
I've got an answer about books. Other than named above it's worth to try Ursula Le Guin (if you liked her books in Russian), Robert Heinlein, Roger Zelazny, Beatrix Potter.

2017-06-04 в 21:36 

Iver N.
Чслапд чушвпчке оржыпршщо.
FanOldie-kun, damn, I haven't enough words to express my gratitude for your help and attention.) It's very inspiring for me!
For reading chose Heinlein's «Door Into Summer» (read it in Russian) and «Good Omens» by Gaiman and Pratchett.

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2017-06-04 в 21:41 

FanOldie-kun
Древний магистр Оймама Джумбабах делает гимнастику старцев с горы Ху Линам.
Iver N., it was a pleasure to me. :)

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